Front Cover Second Draft & Feedback

Front Cover-Second Draft:

Feedback:

Could you make the model stand out a bit more from the background, especially as it is the front cover, it is very important for the model to stand out.

Although, not all magazines have a lot of text, you could include a bit more text on the left side of the page as lots of magazines start with the information on the right side and have smaller, less important pieces of text on the left side of the page; this will also help with the eye-flow of your magazine.

Date line? Your first draft says you are going to have a date line, if not- you need to justify in your evaluation why you didn’t include this convention in your magazine.

Good use of buzz words! This is important to attract your target audience! There is a clear evident link between the main image and the headline, giving the audience more of an idea of the person in the main image of the magazine.