Contents Page-Second Draft:
Feedback:
I like
the layout of the page with the main image in the centre of the page and the
text around it. I also like that you haven't included too much text and just
the most important parts. The font is a good size.
The colours of the editing on
the model and background don't really correlate with the colours used on the
front cover of the magazine- could some more editing be done to improve this? Could
you have something under the title "inside this magazine" to make it
stand out a little bit more and allow the audience to recognise that it is a
contents page?
Could the model stand out a
little bit more from the background? The main image needs to catch the reader’s
attention, it is one of the most important conventions, as if the image doesn't
stand out and they just see text, they aren't going to want to read the
magazine.
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