Double Page Spread Second Draft & Feedback

Double Page Spread-Second Draft:

Feedback:

COLOURS: Could you make the colours of the background more consistent? One side is pink and the other is grey, this doesn't really make the magazine look professional and doesn't conform the codes and conventions of a typical music magazine.

IMAGE: The model in the main image on the DPS doesn't really stand out from the background and catch the readers eye, maybe you could lower the opacity of the background and make the brightness of the model a bit brighter. It is vital that the image stands out to make the reader want to read the page- ensure that you make the model stand out a bit more.

GAP: There is a gap between the images situated at the top of the right hand side of the double page spread? is there a reason for this or it to split the images from the text? Maybe put something colourful there to match the colour scheme of your magazine to make sure this page stands out to the reader a little bit more.

FONT SIZE: if possible, it would be good to make your font size on your DPS a little bit bigger to make sure everyone can read it.  

LAYOUT: The layout of the DPS is good, just ensure you make the improvements to your magazine to make it catch the readers eye and make them want to read the page.